Don't Do This Again

Hit me and make it good. You see me begging?
We both want a blow...
Throw the glass at my feet and breathe it in my face...
Bang on the wall, was that a fist or a body?
I don’t know.
I don’t remember.
I can’t think.
Hit me and make it good. I'm on my knees baby.
Please.
Don’t do this again.

Reviews

[Miss Von Durant]

Good. It is supposed to conjure confusing images. Push-pull and the overall confusion of thought and emotion that someone might experience during a particular situation. The 'abuse' is intentionally vague. Thank you for reading.

[Chrisnelly Hernandez]

This seems like you're writing about abuse. I agree with castargirl, it is confusing. It takes a while for the reader to realize exactly what you're writing about. It's a good poem though! good job! Keep writing!

[castargirl]

i got kind of confused but then i figured it out you write with your own style and i like that keep it up and i like the concept of the whole abuse thing it's always and interesting read because you almost always feel like it can only happen in stories and poems and other things like that