Jack and Jill

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Jack and Jill went up the hill,

To fetch a pail of water.

Jack fell down, and broke his crown

And Jill came running after.

Jack was dead, and so he bled,

His brains lay on the ground.

Jill grabbed a fork, and so she fed,

On Jack without a sound. 

Reviews

[Shay]

o.o so I thinks this is fantastic and like um yups okie yeah

[wordwarrior]

Oh my goodness, what a different ending to the nursery rhyme, although I doubt it should be posted with your extra lines, because it copyrights the whole thing to you.
Good and gruesome ending! Made me smile

[CrazyMeInLove]

This poem seemed to be inspired from a nursery rhyme. Am I Right?

[The Chosen]

Yes it is.

[Scott Mou]

Love the poem....Probobly already won the contest. Keep up the good work!