Blade

Blade

A Poem by FadingShadow

You don’t know me

But you care

The swiftness of the blade

Is stopped by you... All of you

No one cared this much before

Well one who wanted to open the door

Thank you all I thank you dearly

None will get through but that’s okay

The blade will break

Hopefully one day

© 2011 FadingShadow


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I think this poem is beautiful, yet has a dark feeling to it. I love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A dark light, but still somehow bright.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Haha thanks


Posted 13 Years Ago


love it. a nice change from your sad work. and the last two lines were really nice.

Posted 13 Years Ago


thank you.
this is beautiful. you wrote a poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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