Dreaming...Lieing

Dreaming...Lieing

A Story by FadingShadow

Dreams you may think I have them.

Well I did, until that day that one day it all went wrong. Where talking and she f*****g breaks me, have you ever been stabbed in the f*****g chest well it hurts feels like there’s nothing left in the world. In the start we were fine never thinking of the end, big house, life together, kids and an unbreakable love. Then that changed she lost her self and in turn I did too. Became reckless didn’t care bout anything but her making her HAPPY! Let me tell you IT DOESNT F*****G WORK!, she turned around and crushed my dreams. She made me obsessed with her, now look at me knife in my hand tears running down my face... I’m pathetic.

© 2011 FadingShadow


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FadingShadow
Im pathetic

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you're not pathetic you were a boy in love, theres nothing wrong with that. Just don't let go of your life for her, there are so many other people who care about. im sorry.

Posted 13 Years Ago


You're not pathetic. I hope this isn't a true story.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love can go right or wrong. Remember in the end everything's okay. If its not okay it's not the end.

Posted 13 Years Ago


you can't be pathetic for loving someone.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 22, 2011
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