Break a Promise

Now it is done

And I am no longer hoping

For her to call or to say that she still loves me

Because I know that she won’t

And she never really did.

 

I am angry at her

For making me love her

And promise that I’ll never let go

Because my promise was never broken

And her words were emptier than mine.

 

Otherwise I cannot explain

Why would she see another

In such a short period of time?

And how could she bond to him

While I cannot bond to another?

 

She asked me

When we were together

To open up, and to never be scared of her

Because we are stronger, she said

And love can overcome anything

 

But now it is done, my heart is so broken

And I can no longer hope

For her love to light my life

So why I still can’t break my promise

To let go, and let this love die…

 

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

Loving hearts never break; they bleed love an heal with love; a very emotional and sincere write.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Nicely written, it's soft and profoundly expressed. To love so deep only to have your hear broken and it leaves you feeling lost.

Excellent.

[Annie]

Nice work. Very emotional...Kinda relates to whats been happening with me lately. If it's true for you too, hang in there! =) Great write. It reads very well and probably rings true to just about every person...

[Lyrical Love]

What a heart wrenching write...
So emotionally sincere. It's horrible to love and lose,
yet worse to never have loved at all-at least that's the
crap that was told to me.
Nice piece!