Make me proud

Make me proud

A Poem by Krista Graham

It’s hard to remember yesterday

Dark entities in my skull

Swimming in my veins

A dim light, a life wasted

The way things are

I swear I’m human

Red lips that talk

In isolated voices

Tones and tongues

In the pitch dark

© 2011 Krista Graham


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Short and to the point.
But that doesn't even explain how moving this is to me,

"a dim light, a life wasted
the way things are
I swear I'm human
red lips that talk
in isolated voices"

Those lines caught me,
Feeling this way and then again,
if it's loneliness or feeling cold,
I might never know, but I do know this speaks to me.

great write
-j

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Thank you so much. I wrote it in a sad mood.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Short and to the point.
But that doesn't even explain how moving this is to me,

"a dim light, a life wasted
the way things are
I swear I'm human
red lips that talk
in isolated voices"

Those lines caught me,
Feeling this way and then again,
if it's loneliness or feeling cold,
I might never know, but I do know this speaks to me.

great write
-j

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Krista Graham
Krista Graham

s**t, KY



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I write to ease the pain of dealing with bipolar with psychosis. Whether its good or not is irrelevant. I don't edit my work, if I do that then I would be raping that moment in time where I wrote it. more..

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