Confessions From A Hotel Room

Confessions From A Hotel Room

A Poem by Cas Murray

if you’re not something 


you’re nothing


my ribs scream out 


for someone to touch me


because when I’m bare skinned 


between sheets 


I feel like I’m something

© 2019 Cas Murray


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Surely you are something, lonely and singular though you may be. Your poem cries out for a soft touch an appreciation and of the willingness to love. Very nicely done.

Take care - Dave

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Bare sheet and lonely sheet. Needy place to know. Thank you Cas for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow! This really speaks of the mentality of someone in need, even if it means ignoring her dignity. A story much too prevalent I'm afraid. You did this great.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on February 27, 2019
Last Updated on February 27, 2019
Tags: love, lust, desperate, heartbreak


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