Drink Up

Drink Up

A Poem by Cas Murray
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We are merely glasses waiting to be full

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We are all just glasses in a cabinet. 

Waiting to be chosen,
for that one time we will be
full. 

Instead we are dropped,

so we fear being full entirely. 

© 2018 Cas Murray


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Unusual viewpoint described with compelling brevity. To me, this seems like a sad & desperate way to look at life, but I can understand how life could be looking this way to many of those who are longing to be "chosen" perhaps!??!?! A very original way to describe fear of success, as well (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cas Murray

6 Years Ago

Everyone has that little piece inside of them that begs to be wanted, or maybe it is just me lol I h.. read more
barleygirl

6 Years Ago

I agree . . . most people want to be chosen . . . & then some of us finally realize it's better to b.. read more



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I understand the want, indeed the need to feel wanted.
We would wonder why we are here otherwise. All too
well I appreciate the idea of being used too fully and then
let go. A very provocative write.

Take care - Dave

Posted 5 Years Ago


I enjoyed the logic of the poetry. Wanted to be picked and wanting to always filled. Impossible to be done. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Cas Murray

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

I did enjoy Cas and you are welcome.
Unusual viewpoint described with compelling brevity. To me, this seems like a sad & desperate way to look at life, but I can understand how life could be looking this way to many of those who are longing to be "chosen" perhaps!??!?! A very original way to describe fear of success, as well (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cas Murray

6 Years Ago

Everyone has that little piece inside of them that begs to be wanted, or maybe it is just me lol I h.. read more
barleygirl

6 Years Ago

I agree . . . most people want to be chosen . . . & then some of us finally realize it's better to b.. read more

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Added on March 2, 2018
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