I like the words. Each with meaning and taking the reader to some place. I tell people. Proper use of words and thoughts can change the world. I like the complete poem.
"slowly suffocating self satisfaction selfishly
Ironically irritating individuals increasingly irregular
Daring difficult dangers, delightfully dancing delicately
Eras eventually ending effortlessly even eloquently"
Nice fall into the word "eloquently". Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you for reading and for your kind words with your review. :)
Oy, the alliteration, a WC favorite . . . each word tends to fall in accord, almost in cadence, each meticulously chosen to enrich the tapestry. Here we have the ponderer, encompassed by nature, meditating on the wonders of life, the rich and harmonious memories of youth (external); then, they turn, switch, (internal) perception. It’s the demonizing psychological scope that only the individual can cast on themselves, chipping and eroding their interior mind, heart, and soul. I could be reading this wrong, still on first cup of coffee, and I’ve been known to read into things that aren’t there . . . If I am wrong, forgive me.
Thank you for such a wonderful review and I love how you have expressed my poem in your own words. I.. read moreThank you for such a wonderful review and I love how you have expressed my poem in your own words. I don't think you are far off at all and have made great interpretations. I hope you will keep reading and reviewing. :)
10 Years Ago
Good to know my un-caffeinated mind still works. I have saved one of you books for future reading, a.. read moreGood to know my un-caffeinated mind still works. I have saved one of you books for future reading, and I'll do my best to have a look tonight, but I can't guarantee.
I like the words. Each with meaning and taking the reader to some place. I tell people. Proper use of words and thoughts can change the world. I like the complete poem.
"slowly suffocating self satisfaction selfishly
Ironically irritating individuals increasingly irregular
Daring difficult dangers, delightfully dancing delicately
Eras eventually ending effortlessly even eloquently"
Nice fall into the word "eloquently". Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Thank you for reading and for your kind words with your review. :)
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