Empty Evolution

Empty Evolution

A Poem by K.N. Thorn
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Emphatic emotional evolution enveloping everything...

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Emphatic emotional evolution enveloping everything
Monotonous meditation medicine may mystically mellow
Perhaps peacefully pondering places, peoples paces
Treacherous, tense, tired, tinkering travelers traveling
Yearning your yummy youthfulness yearly, yesterday

Inverted, insidious intelligence intensifies, illicitly irate
Needlessly never noticing nostalgic nothings normally
Seductively, slowly suffocating self satisfaction selfishly
Ironically irritating individuals increasingly irregularly
Daring difficult dangers, delightfully dancing delicately
Eras eventually ending effortlessly even eloquently

© 2014 K.N. Thorn


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I like the words. Each with meaning and taking the reader to some place. I tell people. Proper use of words and thoughts can change the world. I like the complete poem.
"slowly suffocating self satisfaction selfishly
Ironically irritating individuals increasingly irregular
Daring difficult dangers, delightfully dancing delicately
Eras eventually ending effortlessly even eloquently"
Nice fall into the word "eloquently". Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



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K.N. Thorn

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and for your kind words with your review. :)
Coyote Poetry

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You are welcome.



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Oy, the alliteration, a WC favorite . . . each word tends to fall in accord, almost in cadence, each meticulously chosen to enrich the tapestry. Here we have the ponderer, encompassed by nature, meditating on the wonders of life, the rich and harmonious memories of youth (external); then, they turn, switch, (internal) perception. It’s the demonizing psychological scope that only the individual can cast on themselves, chipping and eroding their interior mind, heart, and soul. I could be reading this wrong, still on first cup of coffee, and I’ve been known to read into things that aren’t there . . . If I am wrong, forgive me.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K.N. Thorn

10 Years Ago

Thank you for such a wonderful review and I love how you have expressed my poem in your own words. I.. read more
Jack Wolfe

10 Years Ago

Good to know my un-caffeinated mind still works. I have saved one of you books for future reading, a.. read more
K.N. Thorn

10 Years Ago

Sounds great, let me know what you think. :)
I like the words. Each with meaning and taking the reader to some place. I tell people. Proper use of words and thoughts can change the world. I like the complete poem.
"slowly suffocating self satisfaction selfishly
Ironically irritating individuals increasingly irregular
Daring difficult dangers, delightfully dancing delicately
Eras eventually ending effortlessly even eloquently"
Nice fall into the word "eloquently". Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

K.N. Thorn

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and for your kind words with your review. :)
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on October 29, 2014
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K.N. Thorn
K.N. Thorn

Daphne, AL



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I am an avid reader, writer, and gamer. I enjoy art, music, and nature; they are my points of inspiration. I have loved to read, write, draw, and dream ever since I was little. I like to write fantasy.. more..

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