My Hands Hate the Pen

For all those who wish a love of writing could be taught.

Love the copout

 

You have to

Will is not tied

to a fleshy string

it is eternal

Alive,

Undefined

 

Exalt the delayed

 

Please

Raise the undone,

Free to copulate

with deed

 

Defer all discipline

 

Ratify

the wasting away

with success,

Unite with a love

Unfamiliar

 

Have you done it?

No?

neither have I

 

 

Where's my goddamn trophy

 

 

Author's Note

Its been a long, long, long time since I've written a damn thing. I'm hoping with others help I might actually pick it up long enough to make it a habit. So..... bash or bask in it, doesn't matter to me.

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

I think I can see the meaning behind the piece.
I found it to be a little light on the discription, the analogies being a bit vague.
The last nine lines were realy confusing in their meaning.

It seems to be very esoteric in it's vibe. I suggest bringing it down to earth a little bit more.

Other then that I liked the thought behind it though.

Don't give up!
Aaron Maycroft