WILLOWS

...image os willows...

Willows bend

With careless grace,

Dropping leaf-green

Scarves of lace

Into pools

Of silver cream;

Willows dance

And droop and dream.

Reviews

[Angelic Surrender]

Very nice poem. pretty imagery.

[BetanuZwei]

I really enjoyed this, it is short but sweet. It somehow reminds me of a place in my childhood that I had almost forgotten.

[Lilly Negoi]

one first post here - and a lovely one! this is one beautiful piece of poetry, perfectly shaped and structured, and a gorgeous image in it!

[Eagle Cruagh]

'A graceful song for
a willow tree.
A dreamy poem for
you and me.
---- Eagle Cruagh

[Mark]

Short, sweet and tasty, some kinda beautiful simplicity.

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

Yeah, I'm liking what i read here. A lovely ode to a beautiful tree.
Excellently written piece.

[Vesa Lee]

Ooh...I feel as if I've stumbled into faerie land...
Tempo/flow was spot on and song-like.
Please post more; I'd love to see what other morsels you have to offer. *smile*