i like broken women

i like broken women

A Poem by knightcall

didn't hear from you
thought maybe we had hung it up
everybody tries to read me through my poetry 
sometimes it's only make believe
i see you hiding out there in the corn
your interest piques when there's a new bloom
out there in the electronic pasture

i like damaged women
brokenness is downright sexy
this man knows no exchanges and returns
you can't recycle women
you only can maintain them the best you can

the stalks are moving
i tell myself it's the wind
yesterday i saw two scarecrows fighting
they stuffed themselves full of possession
harvest time sends them running
they worry about the knee highs
grown and considerably more upright than them

i like broken women
let me sweep your pieces off their feet
and i sit in the loft on top of this old gray barn
watching a red tailed hawk circle
choosing exactly what he wants
with a swoop and a snatch

the sky and the silt looks so pink at sunset
i'm happy for the quiet
though i must admit
i listen for the snaps
out in the field
psst there's something newly broken

© 2011 knightcall


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totally agree with NG.

Posted 13 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, this was really good, knight...
this was my favorite:
i like damaged women
brokenness is downright sexy
this man knows no exchanges and returns
you can't recycle women
you only can maintain them the best you can"

Powerful :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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knightcall
knightcall

Shawnee Mission, KS



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A trauma chaplain at an inner city hospital. Formerly a sportswriter, a native of Chicago. Now living in the Heartland. more..

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A Poem by knightcall