and you?

everybody wants to know how i'm doing

i'm doing just fine

my world is spinning faster now

it's so nice for you to inquire

eventually i'll catch up to your hearts

don't be fooled by empty spaces

they soon will be full again

i'm a man in transition

trying to get through tomorrow

on the way to next week

right now part of my world is hesitation

it's a physical thing 

some immutable law or something

so long i've waited for some relief

some rain for the heat in my life

sorry to hear your news

sorry this time i couldn't catch you

but inside me

you still bloom

you've grown as long as i've known you

the sand can't shake your roots

ask me a few more questions

i'll get back to you while i can

i close my eyes

the light remains

when the sun stays down

i'll stay for a while

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

when the sun stays down
i'll stay for a while


those two lines say to me, things are a mess right now, so much going on, when there is a slow down, I'll be there.

Nice work Nightcall