sun fresh

you never did notice the sun

caught up in the days of a computer haze

i don't want to be caught of the walls of

something that is not is front of me

something keeps pulling you out of orbit

something keeps pulling you away

maybe i never considered that the sun was counterfeit 

at least that's the way it must have appeared 

maybe the spots kept changing when it was held up to the light

i can let by

conclusions made while too close to the sun

maybe on the other side

things will be clearer that much removed

follow the day, follow the path that brings you back

you're better off knowing

the warm side of the slingshot

you're better off knowing the answers

before you know the questions of the other side of the sun

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

I can relate to that. You are so creative and so much energy emerges from your writing. Excellent.