the tiniest of moments

darlin i saw you for the tiniest of moments this morning

as soon as i caught you i had to go downtown

a crazy b***h waits for an an apology from me

i've got not time all my letters are reserved for you

i wait for the sirens of the parkway but

the only sound i hear

the melody of your magic, the affection of your stone

once i didn't believe in castles made of stitches and grit

but it's the determination that glides through you

awakens my insides for you

brings in the tides for you

and i have to stand back

though i know

i'll find my way

and i wanted you to know

i appreciate you giving this poor boy a listen

from the top of your silver sutured tower

because when i hear you call my name

i'm ready to fight the fires in my life again

and i'm falling into places made of dreams

lifting me up to places only towers reach

Reviews

[Joiedevivre]

This poem needs a lot more points! 100.

[Madame]

i really dig the way this poem flows, the wording. a beautiful write.

[AnnaMariaQQss]

An amazing write. And yeah i am stalking your poems here too! Much Love, AnnaMaria

[Becky C Strukamp]

WOW!! That is such a powerful write. I Love it. A beautiful poem of love and more...wonderful. So very wonderful!