next

the morning came and shook me awake

sleep can be cruel

it can fool you that 

you haven't lost

you don't have love that goes on

into the next world

there's no question that i loved you

plenty of them now that you had to go

where exactly you are

what could have happened 

if we had a little more time

i run into another vision of you

around every corner

you're there waiting

whispering into my ear

Thomas, you've got to move on

Reviews

[AnnaMariaQQss]

So sweet, she is indeed a lucky gal! Tell her I said hello.....and that she's lucky indeed

[Becky C Strukamp]

Moving on ...you penned the truth so well in this poem of letting go. It speaks volume of the anguish and emotions that one experiences in such situations. Nice!

[Daytonight]

Well done Thomas. You put it best in the very last line. Keep on penning.

[November Gold]

Wow, nicely penned! Sadness and reflection, longing. I felt it all. :)

[teddybard]

Fascinating conjecture this brings.
a great poem in that it makes you think


Ps. Mixing things slightly are you still with over40 RG at AP?