my pretty pillar

the most alluring part of you

lies in a pirouette of power

every time you pick up a little one

dance with them in your arms

baby that's the height of your charms

 

the sexiest part of you

hold me in your healing arms

enrapture me with your understanding

you attract me with your endless strength

then you turn around

and catch my tears again

 

now i won't say

that you're not beautiful

because that would be the biggest lie

i've ever told

the strength within you

shines through every essence of you

Reviews

[AnnaMariaQQss]

wow amazing. You're one hell of a poet Sir Knight!

[Daytonight]

Well written Sir Knight of Romance. Don't know which is my favorite part. Maybe the last two lines of the middle stanza. Keep on penning.

[WindSong]

Such a beautiful poem written about one's inner most feelings of love.

WindSong

[Becky C Strukamp]

Beautifully written poem. It captures the essence of love quite well.