drive-by of my morning

hey there little darlin

you live around the corner from me

your fresh face brightens my mornings

i roll past and i always smile

you bring back my youth to me

if i could go back in time

you'd see me in a concert T

and blue jeans

i just wanted you to know

i once belonged to a different world

but i would have liked to have known you

i really shouldn't rush so much

the tailored suit does that to me

i'd rather soak in your smile

just a little bit longer

and i remember the insecurity

the evenings surviving insults

i hope the world has changed for you

and i hope for now

you don't rush any part of you

you lose the t-shirts of summer much too fast

hang on to that sun little darlin

hang on to that sun

Reviews

[Joiedevivre]

aah so nostalgic, the blue jean feel, really well done in expressing this elusive feeling. Crisp and romantic.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Your writings are so inspiring. They sweep you off and bring you back and do with such flair and awe!! Awesome!

[Sukriti Suki]

A like the flow of this piece...and the raw emotion....the last 2 lines are very thought provoking...nice work.

[Daytonight]

Very nice. Keep on penning.