it's a wonder woman

it's a wonder woman

A Poem by knightcall

i don't know completely
what happened to you
but i know your tainted crystal lenses
haven't helped you
the problem is always with someone else

you're a big believer in make believe
having forgotten where reality begins
can't see beyond yourself
you can't understand the hurt you've caused
you can't even see it

maybe you had to build those walls
but you're the only one who can
tear them down
the only result is anger washed down by tears

x-ray me
get a good f****n view
you always need a target
none of the bullets you've sent my way have hurt me
i am iron man
and all you do is deflect

© 2011 knightcall


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Al I can say in response to this is a quote: "What matters is which fiction you believe in." And of course, WOW!

Posted 13 Years Ago


This one is a bit different from your more recent ones Thomas but well done as always! Wonder Woman and Iron Man humm? Interesting. Keep on penning.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great job here, you could feel the raw emotions and how deep this was, very nice work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

WOW!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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knightcall
knightcall

Shawnee Mission, KS



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A trauma chaplain at an inner city hospital. Formerly a sportswriter, a native of Chicago. Now living in the Heartland. more..

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