you land in my eyes

would you hold my hand

while we walked down cobblestone roads

and I'd sing songs to you

bounce off the stars

my fate lies in your eyes

my senses

they remind me of

last night

walking you home

kissing you under the porch light

watching you disappear

for a moment in time

'til once again

you land

in my eyes

and now

it's hard to believe

that i was so afraid to

ask you one question

wrapped around the night

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Absolutely spellbound by this. Passion, romance, wow, it blew me away and took me to a happy place in my mind. It encouraged a smile and a warm fuzzy feeling all over. I love this poem. It sings to a girls heart and soul. Beautiful ...just beautiful!!!

[Daytonight]

Oh wow Sir Knight of Romance! This is such a delightful romantic love poem. Absolutely yummy. Can't pick out a favorite part. Keep on penning.