Bleeding heart

Bleeding heart

A Poem by Knackers
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True Love lost....

"
Darkness descends, 
as i cast my bleeding heart 
into the abyss

There is only one whose
warmth and beauty
can restore its beat 
as I walk the earth a shadow of my true self

Blood runs thick around me
as coldness worms it's way 
through my veins
There is only one I can trust
to banish that chill

© 2011 Knackers


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. me too ... "there is only one I can trust" ...
. you write beautifully ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


A excellent poem. A complete tale is so few words. I like the desire and the way you ended this poem. Sometime our savior have no desire to save us. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Knackers
Knackers

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A man with no previous experiance in writing anything let alone poetry. A quote I like and try to follow (sometimes not very well) "Grant me the serenity to accept the things I cannot change, To ch.. more..

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