Life

Life is just a demontrastion

Of all of this frustration

In the air, its all a illusion

Think about it and bring confusion

 

Never knowing whats right or wrong

We all just tend to follow along

Dont want to hurt others, dont want ot get hurt

Sometimes all this, just makes you feel like dirt

 

You look at life as if its a poster

But you feel it like an emotional rollar coaster

Can't put two and two together. Its not like math

The whole time just hoping you're following the right path

 

Life is just a demontrastion

Of all of this frustration

In the air, its all an illusion

Think about it and bring confusion

Reviews

[Jess Holden]

Lovely rhyme

[sentimental~ galore]

You stand correct, but life is also much more than that. It about what you make of it. I really enjoyed the rhyming in the poem. great work.

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

A intelligent and powerful poem.
Life can sure feel like a emotional roller-coaster.
Your writing is observant and full of life.

[T]

Nice job Po. You've written what's in the mind of a lot of people that can identify with your words. Life is a strange ride and we never know what's coming ahead. We just have to do the best we can I guess.