Beyond

I wrote this for my new friend, he just became my friend a few days ago. and im sad becuase hes leaving. but this is for him.

I went beyond his bumpy face,

into his deep blue eyes,

found a quiet soul,

and befriended it.

Reviews

[Jess Holden]

Love it! :D

[sentimental~ galore]

i really enjoyed this sweet sentence, so very much that it brought a gentle, geniune smile upon my face.

[Loner]

This poem should make him stop and never leave u again.
Great poem full of innocent love.

[Andrew Wright]

I could only smile at reading this. The happiness shivers up my spinal cord...

[Brighid an Lasair]

This made me smile, it reminds me of a good friend of mine. Eyes are the window to the soul, only when people take the time to look into them do they really know a person. Well done.

[emmajoy]

Great feeling, expressed clearly .. he should be thrilled with this very special poem.

[T]

Well said Po. It takes a friendly soul to know one.

[Ruth]

Look what lies within:) Great verse love!
xx

[YouoweYoupay]

I don't f***ing care what you look like. I already like your content. Loving someone for their true form. Brief, but deep. Thanks for sharing.

-Wella

[Molly]

Isn't it lovely when you can capture an entire sentiment, strong and overpowering as sentiments are, in but a few words? This made me smile :)