Go Ahead

Tired of boys being disrespectful towards me and a lot of other girls

touch me, do it

insult me, do it

disprespect me one more time

go ahead

im going to go off on you

like a ticking bomb

im waiting

 

Rap your arm around my waist

go ahead

watch me rip it right off

 

text me one more time

say you wana see a picture

go ahead

the only thing you'll see for the next week

is the imprint of my fist on your face

 

hit my butt one more time

go ahead

my foot will do the same to yours

 

touch me, do it

insult me, do it

disrespect me one more time

go ahead

im going to go off on you

like a ticking bomb

im waiting

 

im sitting here

go ahead

make me mad

 

be a real man

dont be a stupid little boy

back off while you've got the chance

this is a warning

 

touch me, do it

insult me, do it

disrespect me one more time

go ahead

im going to go off on you

like a ticking bomb

im waiting

Author's Note

i was pretty angry when i wrote this and was just trying to release it as best as i could so i know this isnt very good... like at all. but its still a poem that i wrote so im posting it anyway.

Reviews

[Jess Holden]

Hey, its amazing :) the best poetry comes from raw emotions

[Loner]

U think its not good but in my opinion its a masterpiece.
Keep writing please.

[Brighid an Lasair]

You might think it's not good, but it's raw and emotion driven, it relays the way you were feeling when you wrote it and allows the reader to step into your shoes. I personally like it.

[Andrew Wright]

*sigh*... I hate those guys... It makes the rest of us look so stupid. It makes me wonder if we really are the same species... I like this poem, although I wish you didn't have such a reason for writing it... those idiots.

[Matthew Ian Herrawood W]

This makes me mad... i not sure if its because of the time of me reading it or the current convo i haveing or because the Guys that made my life hell would do this sort of thing but i know that some of what i am feeling has come from the power of your words. this is a good poem. not the best ive read true (the best reduced me to tears) but this is still very good better than mine. strong emotions are probably the hardest to write about but when your feeling that emotion strongly and a piece of writing comes from it the reader can always feel the emotion which is exactly what you want witha poem. well done.

[Allison]

I really, really like this! I didn't have to read the Author's Note to know there was a lot of anger in this poem. I can almost taste the anger, it is manifested so amazingly.
Awesome!

-Pokie

[Uniqe In Many Ways]

I like this! Keep up the good workl...

[Ruth]

Ohh, I like the last line a lot lol Intense and meaningful love!
Great poem!
Wonderfully passionate!
xx

[RJM]

:D good one! i like the anger in this poem and the feeling of hate towards those guys! Remember if a guy disrespects you again we all have 1 weak point smack right in between our legs :D

[Molly]

Very angry! I like the rhythm this poem has; seems a lot like a song. Only editing note I would give is that I think you mean "wrap" not "rap."