Love

I think this compares love and rain pretty well haha

Love is like a storm.
It rains all over you.
And when it goes away.
You start to see the blue.
When its rain,
you see the sun.
But when it's love,
You see no one.
Love comes and goes.
But its also kinda painful.
No one ever knows.
Buts sometimes, it is gainful.
It hurts when it leaves.
But its good when it comes.
Some times I wish it wouldn't be.
That way you wouldn't feel the numb.

Reviews

[the_stoic]

sweetly written .. the rhyme scheme was pretty naive but it really brought out the innocent perception of Love of the writer .. there is something cheerful about this otherwise somber write .. good one