I dont know what to do

     I don't know what to do.
     I don't know what to say.
     I don't know about you.
     I don't think I can stay.
I know that I must go.
For I must be alone.
But something you must show.

Will keep me out of know.
     Not knowing what to say.
     Not knowing what to do.
     Not thinking I can stay.

     I'm really not trusting you.

Reviews

[Brighid an Lasair]

This puts an image in my head of someone pacing the floor ranting to no one specific only trying to sort out their own thoughts. It's a stab that grabs the reader and really draws them in. Great rhythm, really drives it home.

[Another Relic]

Well executed poem with good rhythm and rhyme. I understood that line. Doubt and indecision often confuse us when it comes to relationships that are in trouble. Nice one Po.

[Robyn]

This poem does have good rhythm and somehow captures the audiences attention

[Joy]

Very nice rythym in this poem. What is the something that must be shown to keep you out of know? Is it being trustworthy? Good job :)

[Uniqe In Many Ways]

I really like this one. I had to read it again to understand the " will keep me out of know" but when i got it i understood... I really like this. Good work...

[Scooter]

I really liked it. The only line that seemed a little off to me was 'Will keep me out of know.'. I think it's because my mind automatically supplemented 'in the know' instead and that messed me up.

I really do like your poems. Keep up the great work!

[Sports Girl]

Great job

[Randolf Ramos]

Silence indeed is a virtue, that we have to acquire. It gives us the sense of keenly observing what decision we have to do in each situation!

[ShaneBerry]

wo i very strong flow to this write kiddo! great job!