You

You

A Poem by Poetry Girl

You took the depression out of my life.
You came in and gave me light.
You brought with you happiness.
All of those thing- I will miss.
You picked me up when I was down.
You completely turned my life around.
You were my safe place.
The only one I have, in this case.
I felt totally comfortable around you.
If there was something I could say or something I could do.
I wish I could have you back into my arms.
So I can feel your skin and its warmth.
I want to look you in the eye.
And see the smile that arrives.
I want you to be mine again.
You are my best friend.
Maybe in the future,
We'll continue this further.

© 2010 Poetry Girl


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You sound sad and a little heart broken here.....but wise and well adjusted too at the end too.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Willing to try again. That's a good outlook to take for someone you love. Good poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really like this.. your great keep writing..


Posted 14 Years Ago


You took the depression out of my life.
You came in and gave me light.
You brought with you happiness.

really enjoyed this part, this is wonderful and so well expressed.


Posted 14 Years Ago



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I am a 14 yr old girl and ive been through a lot. I havent had the best time growing up and at times i needed rescue and thankfully I got it when i needed it. ive been faced with many tough decisions .. more..

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