I want to cry

Im not really sure who I was thinking about

I want to cry

I dont know why

But I dont know what to do

 

My heart has died

I dont know why

But i just want to see you

 

I want to lie

I dont know why

But I want to be there too

 

I want to fight

I dont know why

But I'd do anything for you

 

I want to cry

I dont know why

But I dont know what to do

Reviews

[Steve]

Nice style! Simple and yet elegant.

[Jason Shadows]

Its Seems Like You Where Hurt During The Make Of This One.. Its Seeks Through The Light Just To Get Out But Lost Within Yourself. You Look Into A New Direction Within The Poem To Escape The Pain. I Like It. Very Nice Touch To Your True Feelings.

[kuru]

hmm this has a nice flow, even though it seems jumbled but it adds a nice effect to it cause it seems like you're feelings are jumbled tooo and you don't know why and you can't seem to straighten them out...it makes the reader share you're uncertainty too. nice work on this one