Im a Jerk

Sometimes I feel like im a jerk
Its just the way whats in me works
You'd think I would be happy
'Cause everything seems to go my way
But instead I am ungreatful
'Cause what i do is hurtful
Or maybe its just in my head
I say that to myself again
Maybe Im just a conceded brat
Taking advantage of all attached
I should just be isolated
'Cause I am truely hated
Not by anyone else
Just mainly by myself
When my happiness is shown
I only think of my own
I dont realize whats around me
Until I am unhappy
Then I search for a crutch
I ask for too much
Im just a big fat jerk
Nothing I do will work

Reviews

[Steve]

Well written! I have the feeling though that you are being way too hard on yourself.....lol

I like how this is written though......

[Alexa Aiden]

Oh wow, I really like this. It's so true to life. I think that a lot of people can relate, especially the ungrateful part.
Good job.

[Kia-chan!]

I love the rhyme skeme in this :) I like the idea of the poem. We all feel like jerks sometimes...Very good :) Thanks for sharing :)