Candles

I was sitting on the counter starring at a candle and decided that I liked them so I wrote this haha xD

The sweet, sweet smell of candles.
The smell of the flames as they burn.
The kind, hard smell of candles.
I don't ever stop to learn.
I don't question how or why it does it.
I don't question why the smell is pure.
I don't wonder how the flame is lit.
I don't wonder why it's such a lure.
I love the smell of candles.
That's all I really know.
The thought to stop and smell the roses
Along the side of the road.

Reviews

[Alexa Aiden]

This is just wonderful! I can't even...
you're a wonderful writer!

[T]

I love scented candles. I can remember walking through the mall and smelling them in a store and wanting to walk in. I suppose that was the idea. Ha It's one of lifes little pleasures as is stopping to smell the roses. Nice job.

[kuru]

nice..i like how you equate the thought of stopping to smell the roses with candles

[deeps]

The thought to stop and smell the roses
Along the side of the road.

Love the ending part. This is amazing and a enjoy to read.