Let Me Cry On You

I was kinda tired of people trying to make me feel better when really all I wanted to do was cry but I still didnt want to be alone

Please let me cry on you
cuz i dont know wat to do
please talk to me
even if you cant see
please take time out
to hear me when i shout
please dont tell me to hush
im just going through so much

I need to see you,
hear you, be with you
anything to make me feel safe
sum1 to make everything ok
im so confused
on wat i should do
so much is piled on me
i feel like i cant breath

Dont bring this back up
i just need a hug
dont just hear me speak
please just talk to me
give me sum advice
just so i can survive
i do need you right now
but dont try to make me smile

Please let me cry on you
cuz i dont know wat to do
please talk to me
even if you cant see
please take time out
to hear me when i shout
please dont tell me to hush
im just going through so much

Reviews

[deeps]

Such a powerful, deep write so full of emotion.
I enjoyed this write.

[the in between]

Wow i love the way you expressed yourself so well :) keep writing!