Im Lost

A Poem by Poetry Girl

Lost in Decisions
Lost in Emotions

Lost in Truth and Lies

Lost in my own Mind

Lost in Life
Lost in the World

Lost in Thought

LOST

© 2010 Poetry Girl

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scatterbrain

a very simple poem, yes. i love it for the sole reason that i LOVE Lost. this IS semi-about the show, right? plane survivors, an island, a monster...?

anyway. maybe a few improvements:

Lost in Decisions
Lost in Emotions
Lost in Truth

Lost my Mind
Lost my Life

Lost all thought

LOST

I think some sort of format would do well, and a bit of change. it gets repetitious and you have to spark the poem to mean something more. I think the "Lost my..." gets that done.

hope that helps :) good luck!

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Another Relic

You speak for many. Everyone must feel like this at sometime in their lives. I don't know if they see monsters though. Ha

Posted 14 Years Ago

scatterbrain

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

deeps

Amazing! such a few words to make a point.
Very creative and so well stated.

Posted 14 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on August 6, 2010
Last Updated on August 16, 2010

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Poetry Girl

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I am a 14 yr old girl and ive been through a lot. I havent had the best time growing up and at times i needed rescue and thankfully I got it when i needed it. ive been faced with many tough decisions .. more..