Shopping Spree

Some days you have the ability,
others on a shopping spree.
Dressing clean, ultra supreme.

To live is just a dream that only you can see with binoculars.
I live in our own aura, the World and I. Where we can kickback, sleek the ruffles out of our curtains.
With blood sleeking down the glass window pane, the beginning of a crystal clear scheme
with crimson stains.
A passing by expert, I have yet to earn what removed hastes to which I should come to a slower pace.
Push you into my fool, a clown to a stalemate.
Copping everything on a shopping spree, my feet don’t touch the ground, they elevate.

Now I’m trying to jam using these hands, but one grips at fear.
I don’t have time for tainted misused feelings.

I have to make them squeal for me. Hide in the bushes, they want to be seen with me. Using correct of muscle, I hold me. Carrying all these packages, I’m the one you want.

Reviews

[Ilisius]

I really loved your line, "To live is just a dream that only you can see with binoculars." We live life peering through views that have been shaped by experiences, our upbringing, our genetics, and so on. Thus, we never truly see reality because we can never get past our unique perceptions of it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Strong, worthwhile and good thoughts in the poetry.
"To live is just a dream that only you can see with binoculars.
I live in our own aura, the World and I. Where we can kickback, sleek the ruffles out of our curtains.
With blood sleeking down the glass window pane, the beginning of a crystal clear scheme
with crimson stains. "
The above lines. I agree with. Thank you Kenna for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Emily]

Very creative write!
I like how it ended!
Keep on writing!

[Pushkar Prabhat]

relationships are difficult.......
we do seem to buy a lot of packaged processed unnecessary emotions.......but its a packaged deal.....
if only our worlds allowed immigrants......
yes i thought a lot about these words......striking expression.....
loved it!!!
:)

[Insight "MH"]

In line 8 I think you meant "leaking" instead of "sleeking", putting that aside, well done on a sophisticated poem.

[samparks,sam]

so sweet poem I like it be continue