I Told The Truth

I Told The Truth

A Poem by Kenna Marie

Truth be told,
I am not that bold.
It is a jab into my eye,
a reality full of lies that my mom blames this distress.
Hold on, I can't tell black from white. Might as well be blind, I can predict even the scenic route that people doubt. My whereabouts are no longer in a crowd, standing with witnesses is unhealthy for me.
I want privacy, isn't being alone key anyways? Who is to care 
if I write "Beware" or just stare. In the end, there is this sentence left to bare. Always interpreting the language I so rarely speak. Energy may flow for others, but I am not a plug one can spark by lousy remarks.

© 2016 Kenna Marie


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Silence isn't a bad thing.
"I so rarely speak. Energy may flow for others, but I am not a plug one can spark by lousy remarks."
Each of us are different. When our time to shine comes. We can be ready. Nice flow of thoughts led to honest ending. Thank you Kenna for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is beautiful, I love this poem. keep up the great work

Posted 8 Years Ago


It's okay to want some alone time, let no one tell you that it's not necessary. It's required for writers, honestly. And being alone also makes your mind more stable and at peace. I really enjoy silence and being by myself, but everyone around me gives me crap for it. I'm not one for constant socializing and always being around people sometimes gives me a headache. Silence is wonderful, enjoy it as much as you can.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like your rhythm and your emotions are made connectable through the writing. I also like the boldness of the last sentence.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I sensed a lot of anger in this.... very emotional.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Strong emotions you have written here. Yes, we must be strong in character, but we must remember that we should not be too hard to be easily broken and not too soft to be easily squashed, we must balance between the hardness and the softness of our personality.

Posted 8 Years Ago


'It is a jab into my eye,'

For some reason, I really like this line!
Keep up the great work!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


very nice your views I like it

Posted 8 Years Ago


I enjoyed the metaphors in this piece. It really brings it to life. Thank you for posting!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great word choice that describes the emotion perfectly. Well done :)

Posted 8 Years Ago



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