"Crescent Moon" (Crystal Clear Longing)

"Crescent Moon"

(Crystal Clear Longing)

 

The silver moon strikes shards

Against the delicate balance of we

 

Like a cherubic angel aloft

Holding a single candle brightly

Cascading your skin in flourescent perfection

 

The stars shine in perfect cadence

As the wondrous silent creatures

Gaze in subtle curiosity at our anxious skin

 

Your mouth tastes of sweet strawberries

And your skin the softest silk

My heart trembles each time you are near

 

As we dance beneath the pale moonlight

Our hearts dance in synchronistic delight

Round the moon and past the  dusty earth

 

A silent sonnet that plays for two

We embrace the countless infinities

That strike as we glance at one another

 

Like an exotic  flowering unfolding

Neatly upon it's own crimson petals

Your sweet nectar imbrues itself

Upon my melancholy disposition  

 

Let the dangerous dark impressions

Of forogtten heartbreaks and dissapointments

Fall  to the ground as a jaded comet

 

With one kiss of your sweet lips

I fall upwards into the mystical sky

Joining other constellations

In the worshipful fascination

Of which you inspire

 

Kenny L. MItchell

Septermber 27, 2009

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

WOW! that was aamzing. def going in my favorites. so eloquent, so beautiful any woman would be blessed to have you in thier life. you would be the kind of guy who would woo your woman, like romeo with juliet.

here is my fav part:

Let the dangerous dark impressions

Of forogtten heartbreaks and dissapointments

Fall to the ground as a jaded comet

wow. you inspire me. accept my friend request?

[J Lorriane]

With one kiss of your sweet lips

I fall upwards into the mystical sky

This is my favorite part, I could truly feel it when reading.

[Ellen Hammond]

Wow! Your imagery/analogies are outstanding. There are so many wonderful lines that it is hard to choose a favaorite. A delightfu, romanticl read! I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing your beautiful thoughts with us. Very inspiring!

[Michael X]

wow, this has a msterful scope of thought kenny, i mean the anaolgies are puire romance, and bliss set to harmony and peace, i am sure this would capture an womans heart and the sincere approach is brilliant.
this is my favorite line, if i had to choose, but its all equally epic:
Your mouth tastes of sweet strawberries

[deeps]

This is such a wonderful, beautiful and amazing write here
Very well written, your words just flowed.

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow.. here is some a passionate inspiration which brings much hope! I loved the flow and honesty of emotions pouring out.. with my favorite lines being:

Let the dangerous dark impressions
Of forogtten heartbreaks and dissapointments
Fall to the ground as a jaded comet

With one kiss of your sweet lips
I fall upwards into the mystical sky
Joining other constellations
In the worshipful fascination
Of which you inspire

What a high tribute.. this person feeding you such a high inspiration as to send you to join in the constellations metaphorically speaking.. worshipping and fascinating of them. Falling upwards.. into the mystical sky.. what lovely, lovely words! Thank you for sharing! =)

[cest la vie]

Zamazing, Kenny!!. I love this piece. Another brilliant write from you!!