"carmel"

 

"Carmel"

 

 

hot sticky

and sinfully

sweet

 

her sugar brown

skin

tempts my

sweet tooth

 

her dazzling

eyes

and

dangerous curves

 

throw me

for a

loop

 

and with one kiss

of her

precious

lips

 

sends me

around the

moon

 

past the

northern star

 

and to the

very

gates

of

   heaven

Reviews

[Jola]

Sweet and passionate poem .. I like it
Greetings Jola

[cest la vie]

Hmm, sweet, tempting, delicious. Another finely crafted piece.

[RainyDay]

Pretty, and well-written. This was a great poem and the imagery was intriguing too. Short and sweet.

[Tiffany]

That was lovely, simple, nice imagery. Thanks for sharing :) t