lover's creativity

"lover's creativity"

Breathe life into me

The subtle clay you mold

Bequeath to me riches

Beyond the common pale

Seek the creature comforts

And the grand design of eloquence

Lay rapturous kisses

Against my troubled brow

Lead me not into temptation

Your sublime wordless cry

Paints a picture that seduces

The westward wind

Sings a silent sonnet

That is personfiied

By the beauty of your love

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Oh.. but to have such a sublime love is to have more than the richest person alive!!! No amount of money can buy that love.. and you have found the beauty of such through another to write about! I loved the feeling in this one.. alot of passion and mystery! The lines:

Lay rapturous kisses
Against my troubled brow

Very enthralling.. short and sweet but this piece speaks a thousand words! =)

[Lizanne]

A beautiful and flowing piece of word artistry. You write with style and eloquence. "Breathe life into me... The subtle clay you mold." You speak well and knowingly of what it is to be loved. To be molded by the hands of the one that can bring the passionate part of you to life. This is a wonderful work and your poetic pen served you well. Keep that pen moving. You are a very talented writer and a true lover of words. Your pen caresses them and brings them to life.

[Lady V]

Beautiful piece. I love your poems more and more everytime I read a new piece.


Live, Love and Learn

Lady V

[cest la vie]

As some one said to me, passion is in the air here!! This is a passionate, sensual piece. This sounds like nirvana. Great poem, Kenny..