The Way

The Way

A Poem by Kelly
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Losing yourself to attraction

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You should see the way he smiles

The way his lips twist and curve

The way his jawlines ends

The way his chin squares off

The way his eyes emit moon beams

The way he doesn’t know

He doesn’t know his power

He craves the power

Yet he’s had it all along

 

The way I falter

The way I swoon

The way I hang onto his words

The way I want to impress him

The way I fall to my knees

All for him

Only for him

 

I’ve lost my power

I craved that power

No longer mine

I’ve lost my way

He can have it his way

It’s the way

The way I fell apart 

© 2013 Kelly


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This was lovely. :) I tend to be a sucker for repetition, and your usage of it doesn't disappoint. :) You took a very relatable experience but made it personal and unique. I could really feel the roller-coaster of emotions you go through in that experience while reading this. I really enjoyed it.
...And who wouldn't falter and swoon over a Jim Morrison-lookalike? :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kelly

11 Years Ago

I'm so glad you understand ;D



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This was lovely. :) I tend to be a sucker for repetition, and your usage of it doesn't disappoint. :) You took a very relatable experience but made it personal and unique. I could really feel the roller-coaster of emotions you go through in that experience while reading this. I really enjoyed it.
...And who wouldn't falter and swoon over a Jim Morrison-lookalike? :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kelly

11 Years Ago

I'm so glad you understand ;D

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