Collapsing Relapsing

Collapsing Relapsing

A Poem by Kelly
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A little song I made out of a daydream.

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If the world ended tomorrow

I’d call you on the phone

To tell you how I feel

Maybe we could run away

We’ll meet in Tennessee

We’ll get there if we drive fast

Pray to God for money

We don’t have much cash


It’s alright, we’ll be fine

Break the law one more time


Stealing isn't worth it

But we can’t get by

F*ck the rules, they don’t fit

Bend them we will try

There’s whiskey in the backseat

Its liquid darkness gleams

We can take this damn heat

We'll never give up on false dreams


It’s alright, we’ll be fine

Break the law one more time


Everything’s collapsing

There’s only you and me

Our judgment is lapsing

Now we’re truly free


If the world ended tomorrow

 I’d call you on the phone

To tell you how I feel

Maybe we could run away


It’s alright, we’ll be fine

Break the law one more time


It’s alright, we’ll be fine

Break the law one more time


© 2013 Kelly


Author's Note

Kelly
I made this months ago.

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It's good to know who you'd spend your last breath ...with - if you could. I wonder the tune roling through your mind and the rhythm.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


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That's really cool! Would make a good song.

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Posted 11 Years Ago


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I really like that, it's sweet in a dark sort of way. I dig it. :)

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Posted 11 Years Ago


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Kelly

11 Years Ago

thanks ^_^
Great imagination!
Did you sing it yourself?

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Kelly

11 Years Ago

Thanks, and only to myself.

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