CHECK, PLEASE!

the dark side of the "facebook" generation and it's effects on a lonely persons love love life.

b******s in 

bandages

brandishing 

barrels of 

booze.

who’s in the

mood to

schmooze?

YOU LOSE!

too busy

snoozin’ and

now it’s 

too late! or,

too soon?

patty-cake and

chalk on slate

have mutated into

dinner dates

and texts sent

too late! or,

too soon?

impatiently imposing

probing and pesking

suggesting sickly senses.

devouring whatever

silly chance you had left...

check, please!

Reviews

[QuietlyCrash]

Ha! I hope this was meant to be funny because I found it hilariously accurate. We are all so caught up in our social media we let life slip right on by while we wait for the next update. I enjoy the repetition you used in this poem, it just flowed nicely. You definitely have a talent for writing and I look forward to reading more of your work. :)
-Riley

[ikibala222]

haha yes it was meant to be funny, thank you so much!

[stephen dillon]

are you sure you are not bukowski reincarnate? love the angry sentiment also if you want checkout some of my stuff

[ikibala222]

ahh thank you so much! i just might be :)