welliwishiknew

there are clouds and birds and fishes that swim

adventure

is everywhere she says, purple and red flowers and white flowers and orange flowers and winding

me up she said and watching

as i fill the room with me
sing alittle burlap and drums that have eyes and noise that

makes the room expand

the clouds too rise off the mountains and i eat a hotdog
in front of you

space too does exist in a big barn where the noise of nothing but one swallow
you can
hear the wings

turns and jets... turns and jets... to fill the space

and i am a girl dancing in the moonlight having nothing to spare but one tiny
foot

kicked away into the stars

Reviews

[Robin]

adventure and the stars , what's not to love ?

I love this

[Emily B]

he asked me once if I preferred a bunch of costly roses or a bouquet of wildflowers picked with care and I gestured at the fields all around . . . thanking him for the hundreds of bouquets he placed for my enjoyment

[...]

. beautifully poetic ...
. incredibly vivid ...
. that last image of "dancing in the moonlight" is spectacular ...
. your writing is always so unique, mr. kmartell ...