ten minute walk

 

 

 bright daydreams of a dog on a sidewalk then

I step

 on my own shadow, 

follow it into beverage-mart for a turkey bacon sub.

I come out.

   in cars leaning, banging doors with fists

leveraged by

gravity,

contempt,

 an angry face in a  passing window  pulling

yellow smoke into his nose.

 

Reviews

[A.A.Romanczuk]

mundane pictures grasped upon a brief walk turned exquisite

[kmartell]

a rewrite