Pictures

it's not quite finished yet, gotta love a work in progress

Pictures of me

strewn around

for everyone to see

pictures of me

with my heart on my sleeve

these pictures of me

and what used to be

while you scatter my love

like a lost honey bee

pictures of me

pictures of me

strewn around town

like it's something to see

all I've got left

are my memories

I'll take them with me

while you run around

with your pictures of me

Reviews

[visions of doom]

any pictures your ex may show around cannot depict the beautiful woman you are , all anyone could ever see is a woman who gave her heart to a man she loved and in showing those pictures , he portrays himself as the low life he really is , i know those of us who love your poetry would find the picture you paint here of him to be far more damaging .

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

What work?? I think it is great as is.... you can feel like betrayed when not only you lose a love but they feel the need to share intimate details of your lives now that you are not together. A very firm and solid piece of writing.