Very emotional.. I can sense the confusion, the anger, the comtemplative mindset. This was set up well, and I was able to connect with the poem, as many other people probably can too, which makes it more appealing.
l love the use of italics to express a deeper inner thought... ok.. and its looks kinda cool too.. :) Excellent work.. I felt every word, we wish people that hurt us stayed hurt as well... but thats not the case...
aah a broken heart poem , how well i know that feeling , i have always somehow fought my way back as you will have done but i must admit , its very very painful and brilliantly portrayed in this poem . very well done .
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