Have You

Have You

A Poem by K. McNeil

have you
have you ever
have you ever fallen
have you ever fallen in love
have you ever fallen in love so deep
so deep you forget
so deep you forget to love yourself
all you kno is that you're not alone
but you are still lonely
have you ever forgotten?
have you ever?
have you?
have you...

© 2008 K. McNeil


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I like. The format reminds me of a poem called "ow the dow" by gonsalves. Are u familiar with it? If not you should check it out (google). Anyways, not only is the format intersting the message is valid and not too abstract to understand. ( not that abstract is bad, but sometimes it's good just to get it)

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K. McNeil
K. McNeil

Durham, NC



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My name is Keandra McNeil and succeeding is my occupation but my passion is writing. I'm 18(yes im a youngin in the game). I attend NC State, so if anyone has writing hookups there PLEASE HOLLA AT ME... more..

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