pappa,

did i visit you?

i meant to visit.

here shows my preoccupation with

the rest of the world.

 

"you sure think of yourself, don't you?"

i think of myself, don't i?

 

what good is it for me to see

a dead man sleeping?

 

Reviews

[☮Alpenglow]

Lovely poem. Your words sound careful, planned, shining with a light which is rich with experience. Keep writing.