Snowflakes

Dancing, falling

Snowflakes in flight

Flawless beauty

Dazzling in white

Author's Note

*random* :p

Reviews

[Guilt]

If it's short it must be brilliant. This has got mine and many other ticks of approval. A delight to read. As purely spirited as snow itself :)

- Guilty

[hundi]

it reminds me of the peacefullness of watching snowflakes fall to their destiny on a dark night, thers usually no sound around , and it makes me feel closer to "him" ,thank you for that imagery

[Patrick Henry]

Love it!! ....especially when time is set aside to stop, look up, and let them frost-bomb your tongue!! ; ) Clever little poem. ; ) xoxo -Mark

[CreativeStroke]

The format is beautiful, kind of looks and feels as if a snowflake were falling onto the page. You have a talent for writing and I certainly enjoyed this piece.

[Ban Heo]

"dancing and falling / Snowflakes in flight / Flawless is beauty / that dazzles in white" I recommend. I feel like less "ing" gives more depth to this poem.

[Patrick]

very elegant piece of writing...loved the selection of words

[Tate Morgan]

I love snow when i was young it use to snow more way more than it does now

[White Ink]

How sweet :)