Snowflakes
A Poem by
Kelly M.
Dancing, falling
Snowflakes in flight
Flawless beauty
Dazzling in white
© 2013 Kelly M.
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Reviews
If it's short it must be brilliant. This has got mine and many other ticks of approval. A delight to read. As purely spirited as snow itself :)
- Guilty
Posted 11 Years Ago
it reminds me of the peacefullness of watching snowflakes fall to their destiny on a dark night, thers usually no sound around , and it makes me feel closer to "him" ,thank you for that imagery
Posted 11 Years Ago
it reminds me of the peacefullness of watching snowflakes fall to their destiny on a dark night, thers usually no sound around , and it makes me feel closer to "him" ,thank you for that imagery
Love it!! ....especially when time is set aside to stop, look up, and let them frost-bomb your tongue!! ; ) Clever little poem. ; ) xoxo -Mark
Posted 11 Years Ago
Love it!! ....especially when time is set aside to stop, look up, and let them frost-bomb your tongue!! ; ) Clever little poem. ; ) xoxo -Mark
The format is beautiful, kind of looks and feels as if a snowflake were falling onto the page. You have a talent for writing and I certainly enjoyed this piece.
Posted 12 Years Ago
The format is beautiful, kind of looks and feels as if a snowflake were falling onto the page. You have a talent for writing and I certainly enjoyed this piece.
"dancing and falling / Snowflakes in flight / Flawless is beauty / that dazzles in white" I recommend. I feel like less "ing" gives more depth to this poem.
Posted 12 Years Ago
"dancing and falling / Snowflakes in flight / Flawless is beauty / that dazzles in white" I recommend. I feel like less "ing" gives more depth to this poem.
very elegant piece of writing...loved the selection of words
Posted 12 Years Ago
very elegant piece of writing...loved the selection of words
I love snow when i was young it use to snow more way more than it does now
Posted 12 Years Ago
I love snow when i was young it use to snow more way more than it does now
How sweet :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
How sweet :)
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Added on December 7, 2011
Last Updated on October 25, 2013
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"The Spirit of God made me; the breath of the Almighty God gives me life."
Job 33:4
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