Tale of the Bear

There once was a bear

Who was very rare

Who pulled out all his hair

Because of a dare

But he didn't care

So, he flew through the air

In his magic chair

To go to the fair

There he ate a pear

That he shared with a mare

Who was strangely square

And wearing pink underwear

He then fell down some stairs

And got quite a scare

Along with some glares

So he went back to his lair

But got caught in a snare

So he decided to despair

Author's Note

I hope you laughed. ;) This is a poem my sisters and I came up with when we were terribly bored.

Reviews

[M.E.Lyle]

This is hilariously funny. Is that being repetative? I love reading stuff like this. I never knew so many words rhymed with bear. Thanks for the smile.

[light and ashes]

This is very cute poem but not in a bad way. It reminds me slightly of Dr.Seuss writing because of the peculiar silly imagery, and the rhyming of every line, p.s. I love Dr.Seuss! :] ha take care and keep writing

[Julie Beth]

i know i laughed i could never think of something like this amazing job :)

[Murtuza]

Wow, I didn't know you were so good at comedy :). Light and entertaining. A fine piece indeed.

[Nishant Gupta]

nice one read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".

[EMF]

Really sweet poem. I read it to my grandaughter and she loved it. So based on her comments.. and repeated requests to read it again, I had to copy it out by hand to read it to her. I will get rind once she tires. One bit of advice I would give is to copyright your work. If you get into the habit now, it will be second nature in the future. Many thanks

[Krystal Nicole]

So cute!! I loved the rhyming!!! Great job to you and your sisters!!

[Wolfwind Words]

A fabulous weave of imagery, rhyme and humor. Certainly a piece to make one smile and give a laugh. Great Ink!

Wolfie