Yes

Yes

A Poem by Kelly M.

One white daisy
You gave to me
Swung me around
Under the cherry tree

We walked together
Your hand in mine
The clouds parted
The sun began to shine

Butterflies danced
My heart began to sing
Then you knelt down
With a diamond ring

I jumped into your arms
Nodding my head "yes"
Soon the day would come
When I'd wear my wedding dress

© 2011 Kelly M.


Author's Note

Kelly M.
Inspired by Hundred More Years which is one of my favorite songs. :) Oh, and I didn't know what to do for titles, so if you have any different suggestions, I'd appreciate it. :)

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Liz
I REALLY like this one. The flow is just amazing. I find it very interesting that you were able to come up with this from a song.
You told a sweet, beautiful story and the whole poem just made me smile (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aww, this is really sweet. I love it. Keep up the work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Awww very sweet, refreshing, lovely and beautiful!!!!

Thanks for making me smile :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


THis was cute:) Nice job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well this is adorable. Your description really helps the reader see what you want them to see. Good job delivering the story in a very pleasant and light way.

Posted 13 Years Ago


beautifully written! Great Job!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Another beautiful writing. I love how the words flowed together with each other. :)

~Lizzard~

Posted 13 Years Ago


I imagine this the dream of all secret hears that long for the love of life to find them

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the title you gave it! And I loved this peom! It was so sweet :)

~Erinne

Posted 13 Years Ago



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